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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-10-25 08:39 AM




Carried away by tiny angels
I dwell in a lovely place
under the shadow of HIS wings
away from our desperate world
where peace is no longer
in our court

BloomingRose

© Copyright 2002 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-10-25 08:42 AM


BloomingRose
Well done, enjoyed the read. And the picture.

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-25 12:43 PM


I love this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-25 02:17 PM



Thank you for writing this for me. Saves me trying to express it as well as you have done!

This is a keeper for me!

Earth Angel

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4 posted 2002-10-25 03:21 PM


Rose - Don't get carried too far, as we'd miss you, and then where would our peace be?
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5 posted 2002-10-25 05:18 PM


Debra, this is so beautiful. thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

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6 posted 2002-10-25 05:18 PM


Lovely write-lovely gal....I got carried away by Angels once....(Hell's Angels-haven't been the same since)....I'm still waiting for Earth Angel types to come carry me off...(Blooming Rose would me nice too?)
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7 posted 2002-10-25 05:21 PM


What a calming poem in a all the chaos, enjoyed.

  

Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me.

Robert Adamson
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8 posted 2002-10-25 08:05 PM


I like reading this poem. I think it would go well in print and your chosen image is nice. Thank you.

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9 posted 2002-10-25 09:36 PM




(sigh) Oh Debra, this is sooooooo gorgeous and hopeful, sweet firend, let's hope soon we can fit this realm into the real world and bring harmony to all finally, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2002-10-25 09:38 PM


This is just beautiful and I love the picture. Thank you for expressing sentiments that so many are feeling.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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11 posted 2002-10-25 09:40 PM


Very peaceful and a great place to escape, to feel that security we all seek. Enjoy this a great deal.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2002-10-26 08:13 AM


Thank you all so much.
Right now our troubled world is a sad place indeed, but I truly believe there is a place of peace that can be found, and I hope each one of you can find it too.
Hugs to all,
Deb

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