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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Each Day The marrow in my bones turns churn At echo speeds of toss and yearn And brings the whole of me to chill Upon the nightingale in thrill Upon the evergreen of trees Upon the gold of seasons leaves Upon the breeze that teases me Upon my sail in fantasy It takes my eyes to heavens skies Where aura borealis lies And pleases me with magic snow With ever changing patterns flow It warms me each and every spring That chimes the bell the seasons ring It shows me all the butterflies And takes me into Eden’s lie. It shows me this in every way Yet I’ve been blind until today. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I must protest your closing couplet... I have been reading your poetry for almost 3 years now...trust me--your eyes haven't missed a thing... It shows me all the butterflies And takes me into Eden's lie. I do so love the view thru you...and all the winkies too *L*  *ww*    Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, I think it is typical how we all are blind at first in these circumstances we face early in life, but yet once we weather them we find that appreciation in true beauty and no more are we blind in seeing it! (big hugggsssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, In the night we are blind to the day And in the day we are blind to the night. Each 24 hrs is a new experience. So blind is a relative thing And I extended to spring. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky  Noah, Thank you my friend for the read and kind reply. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.! May I be as blind as you have been until today! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you sweet Angel. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Oh to look just once at the world through your eyes! Wonderful read this morning love. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Love ya. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - All I know is that your writings have "opened" my eyes to just how beautiful and amazing life really is. I had been "blinded" by happenings which really didn't matter. Thankyou. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (10-25-2002 09:47 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sy, your explanation to JanetMarie was as beautiful as the words you write. ~smiling~ M by the way every new day in Tampa, was better than the night before spent in my closet of darkness |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Each day is seized with gust anew 'twould that we stop and touch the dew before it falls into the mist and where is lost that lissome kiss. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Each minute new with eyes of you Wonderful thoughts this morning, Sy...I'm beginning now! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you, Maureen, You are a sweet thing. Sunshine, Beautiful poem, enjoyed. Martie Yes you are begining know. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
However blind you might have been The time is now, there's no more then And now the view shared from your eyes Is one I hope you realize Is treasured by this gal each day - Thank you, Sy, is what I say. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, Suthern said it so well, above. I love your insight into things and your words that so skillfully portray them. thanks for being you, dear Sir. Love to All, Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, I have to echo Janet Marie's sentiments that your eyes have not missed one single thing. And 'each day' I look forward to having tea with your words. You are a delight and a wonder. Hugs and blessings upon you. Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern And thank you dear is what I say. Ethel And thank you for being you, Marti, Hugs and blessings back. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well that was an insightful poem, and here I was thinking - better send him a flashlight ) but then I realized what you were saying and I "saw" it. Your wisdom overwhelms me sometimes, and I hope I am smart when I grow up too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are already smart you will be brilliant when you get older, if ever. LOL |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart as always this is exquisite, your writing simply sings to me today, you really do light up the sky with your poetic touch. Through the veil of mist your sight Reveals much more than day or night Daily you show the world arrayed In the colours here displayed I would if I could always see The world through your poetry So dance my mind into the day Dip and whirl and let me sway Take me there to that place once more Wrapped in your poetry Seymour There are more colours deep within you Which paints the world in vibrant hue Truly wonderful writing you are both wise and clever and I love this utterly utterly utterly love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Thank you my dear your poetry is supurb and a joy to read. I hope you are well and getting back to your routine. |
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