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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-10-24 04:59 PM

I hold the heart of my true love inside.
Inside my heart's four walls, a safer place.
This is the place where love for her abides.

Yet, for a time, she hid her heart from mine
Until her fears with calm I did erase.
I hold the heart of my true love inside.

My heart was one in which she could confide,
A place to flee to from the tiring race.
This is the place where love for her abides.

I showed her love and life I could provide;
Provide to her a sense of calming grace.
I hold the heart of my true love inside.

Her fears are now so quickly cast aside,
No longer do the tears run down her face;
This is the place where love for her abides.

Her love for me remains my only guide.
The guide that brings me back to her embrace.
I hold the heart of my true love inside.
This is the place where love for her abides.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-10-24 05:50 PM

Moonlight Romeo, I lvoe the way you write Vilanelles, perfect metre and form.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-24 06:01 PM

This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2002-10-24 06:32 PM

Such beautiful words of love and longing and so much enjoyed.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

4 posted 2002-10-24 06:39 PM

Very Beautiful...enjoyed very much!

DeaDiAmore

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-10-24 07:50 PM

Villanelles are humdingers to write, and you have done it so well.

EA

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-24 07:54 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may nothing but true loves happiness always reside deep in both your hearts beating in the same rhythm to eternity! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-10-24 07:55 PM

Romeo, this is simply beautiful......and so well written. I love your work and look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-10-24 08:51 PM

enjoyed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-10-24 09:00 PM

Very very beautiful...
Enjoyed so very much!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

10 posted 2002-10-24 09:03 PM

MR darling heart, you know there is within your words such beauty, and you shade it so delicately and deepen the colour so skilfully. Wonderful writing darling heart, absolutely wonderful, you know I utterly utterly love this.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2002-10-24 10:08 PM

This is simply a beautiful write and a pleasure to read. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-10-24 10:09 PM

I really hope you are sharing these with the one you adore.....most beautiful....

Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

13 posted 2002-10-24 10:14 PM

Hi, Love.
Its always good to know we can come home with the truth and not be kicked out.

This is lovely poem reflects the beauty of your warm heart.

I adore it.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

14 posted 2002-10-25 08:38 AM

Thank you all my friends. It is good to have your encouragement. At times, it is difficult to write in these forms, but, I do try. I am glad that you are pleased with the results.

Dear One, yes, the truth will always be welcome. I love you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

SailorFirebird
Junior Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 16
15 Miles North of NoWhere

15 posted 2002-10-25 12:49 PM

one word...beautiful. another word...awesome!

Not all days are happy, but always remember that a bad day will be followed by a better one.

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