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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-10-24 12:27 PM


air drifts, draws dampness
golden hues don patio
scattered leaves dress lawn


©October 22, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-10-24 01:16 PM



Virginia...a wonderful pictograph!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-10-24 10:16 PM




....It's as if I'm actually there!

EA


Temptress
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3 posted 2002-10-24 10:52 PM


Autumn is lovely.
This poem is beautiful.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26
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PA
4 posted 2002-10-25 09:05 AM


Nice senryu Vas! Only wish I was half as good at these things, then I wouldn't be flunking Nan's workshop!! LOL

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