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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-10-24 11:08 AM


To tell the ones we love, we should
never fail
For we really don't know if they will
ever stay well

In this world we now are
living in
We never know what is going
to happen

With drunken drivers on
the street
Our death we could very
well meet

And an insane sniper out there shooting
bullets everywhere
Aiming to shoot innocent people, and
causing so much fear

Though our loved ones may not even sick
have been
We really don't know if their heart will
still beat without end

And each time they walk out
of the door
Are we going to see them ever
anymore

When my dear love and I together have
to part for now we know
From the very start of our visits, our love
we need ever to tell and show

To tell the ones we love we should
NEVERfail
For we really don't know if they will
ever stay well

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-24 11:14 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooo heartaching and true, sweet friend, I too hope one of those two maniacs is that sniper and then finally the news of relief can be made to all the Washington and Virginia and Mryland children and children all across the world also are safe and loved! (sad sigh) This is so heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send angel hugs out to all the children, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-24 11:33 AM


garysgirl
Good write, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2002-10-24 11:38 AM


~~Noah~~

~~Seymour~~


Thanks so much to both of you talented poets for your sweet comments. I love the poetry and comments of both of you so very, very much. Thanks.
Love To All,
Ethel

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4 posted 2002-10-24 02:40 PM


Yes, our actions speak louder than words in letting those around us know how much they are loved, though telling them they're loved is also important.  
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5 posted 2002-10-24 03:02 PM


Yes garysgirl, speak now for we never know what might be. Thanks for the write.

SG

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6 posted 2002-10-24 03:03 PM


you are right! now I Have some phone calls and emails to send out..seriously...

Consider yourself fuzzed

[This message has been edited by FuzzyFrazzledFraggle (10-24-2002 03:04 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-10-24 03:07 PM


How very true Ethel...
Thanks for the timely reminder.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-10-24 07:48 PM


~~Michael~~ I believe so, too. We should also   SHOW   our love as well as tell it.

~~SimplyGold~~ I know. We never know what tomorrow, or the next hour, holds, do we?

~~Fuzzy~~ Yeah, me too. I was talking to myself, too. I get busy, sometimes, and forget to make those important calls or     e-mails.

~~Nancy~~You're welcome, lady. You are so sweet.

Thanks very much to all of you for reading my poem and for leaving a reply. I appreciate it very much



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