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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-10-24 03:32 AM


A gazelle has no choice in the matter,
it is a gazelle,
and the lions,
must feast.
He has no aspirations
to claw his way into the pride.
Such is the burden of man.

I'm on my feet, I'm on the floor, I'm good to go
All I need is just to hear a song I know

© Copyright 2002 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-10-24 11:13 AM


This is a great post.  Honestly i love how straight forward it is.  I wish i read this before i posted today it would have helped me on part of my poem.  Just don't be the prey, it makes life much easier.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-10-24 11:28 AM


Kevin
Good write, enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-10-24 02:32 PM


Refreshing style and graceful direct entrance. Nice write. ThisDiamond
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2002-10-24 02:37 PM


kev,
excellent writing from your pen my
sweet friend...and an excellent look
at how life really is. some things just
can't be helped no matter the cost!
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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