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Casanova
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since 1999-06-21
Posts 48
Mays Landing NJ

0 posted 2002-10-24 01:53 AM



MY DESTINY

I've waited for you,
For what seems like forever.
I ignored my emotions,
As my conscience I sever.
It's tearing me apart,
Not knowing what to do.
I'm just following my heart,
In my search for you.
I don't know where to go,
Or if I'm right or wrong.
But I know where I'm at now,
Is not where I belong.
So I keep searching for you,
Through endless space.
Hoping against hope,
That I'll soon see your face.
But I can't hold my emotions,
And I softly start to cry.
I can't seem to find you,
And I just don't know why.
Maybey your not there,
And were not meant to be.
Maybey I was wrong,
Wanting you as my Destiny.
But you were my fire,
My only reason to thrive.
The thought of you,
Is what kept me alive.
But now my fantasy,
Has helplessly been shatterd.
And the pieces of my heart,
Across time have been scattered!

And As I'm sitting here,
Looking back through time.
I know what I did wrong,
I can clearly see my crime.
In my endless search,
To try to find you.
I never even realized,
you're searching for me too.
So if were meant to be,
And you are my destiny,
I'll wait here paitiently,
For you to find me...

-TO BE CONTINUED (When I Find you)



© Copyright 2002 Daniel R. Cuellar - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-10-24 02:41 PM


Very sweet write. Enjoyed the good and sensible of it. ThisDiamond
Tammy Blessing
Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366
PA
2 posted 2002-10-24 02:51 PM


Great write here! Good luck on your search. I know your soul mate is out there somewhere! Just remember...the things you look hardest for are usually the ones hideing right under your nose. That happens to me with my keys alot....
Tammy

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