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JediRaver
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0 posted 2002-10-23 10:59 PM


Nothing is as beautiful
as looking deep into your eyes
and when I fall within them
your soul and mine connect
and at that very instant
you become the heaven that I've
searched for my whole life
more pure than undying love
more real than life itself
In you I feel tranquility
In you I am alive
There is no other sacred place
that can exist within this universe
then the space I share with you
as the light reflects your very soul
and fills me here
no longer am I alone
the distance that was there before
Fades away forever...drifts and disappears.
The elation that bursts forth from me
reflects in you and shatters all my fears.
I pray that
my imperfections and faults
are hidden from your sight...
so you'll never see how vulnerable
I truly am...without you near
so hard to bare...whenever I'm alone

Nothing is as beautiful
as awakening upon a sunlit morning
holding you in my arms
drinking from a fountain
of Laughter...that never shall run dry
but flow on forever...
and shall never let you cry
I want to make you smile
time and time again
I never want to see you hurt
another second in your life
because in you I've found my happiness
In you my saving grace and
how I yearn to be with you always
for every single second
that I draw breath tonight
and as that light shines upon our morning faces
I shall yearn for you every moment
that the miles shall keep us apart
as I shall cherish every second
that we are together in my heart
because nothing is as beautiful
as you are to me...
and nothing is as perfect
as the moments we have shared together
and the moments that have yet to be!

-Jedi

© Copyright 2002 Ryan Flanagan - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-23 11:00 PM


Awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

JediRaver
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2 posted 2002-10-24 07:29 AM


any replies or comments would be greatly appreciated

-thanx

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-24 08:16 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ryan, I can understand these emotions ever so well, sweet friend, it takes a lot of courage and strength nowadays to hang onto love but if a love is true it can endure and with a golden heart such as yours I know you will prosper and in the end all will be compensated with the tears you feel! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing!



May loven and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tammy Blessing
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4 posted 2002-10-24 08:39 PM


Love is truly a beautiful thing, as is this write! Keep posting.
Tammy

vandana
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5 posted 2002-10-24 08:49 PM


enjoyed
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6 posted 2002-10-24 11:19 PM


makes me think of appreciating the simple things in love.
Lovely..

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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7 posted 2002-10-24 11:30 PM


Ryan, the beauty of this poem has made me speechless..very unusual for me.
Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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