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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-23 07:44 PM



Knot

you are
the silk of me
the material
of smoothest lace
a fastened
threaded whisper
intertwined
looped in space
separately we wrap
to one cord
altering what
we have got
so secure now
is this tie
spun into
a lover’s knot



I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-23-2002 07:49 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-24 12:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may the lovers knot always remain tight and may you wear the broches of love to your heart with every season that goes! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-24 09:29 AM


Sort of give the meaning of tieing the knot, I liked this, especially it being silk; soft and strong
garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-24 10:16 AM


Oh yes, Helen. I love this...and totally relate. Gary and I are truly tied into a "Lover's Knot". Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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4 posted 2002-10-24 10:58 AM


Awww Helen, this is just charming. Thank you....

Hugs, Marti

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5 posted 2002-10-24 07:06 PM


Very nice Lady

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