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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-10-23 04:20 PM


Sometimes I have strong emotions
But how to express them
Can be hard
For anybody
Including me

Sometimes you keep it pent up
Then after awhile you blow
Like a volcano

That is why
We have to talk them out
Or write them out
Because if the emotion is negetive
And you blow
You lose friends
And will never regain there friendship
Or their trust
Or their love

So when your emotions
Decide to run wild
Find somebody to talk to
Or write a poem or two
And hopefully
Without a doubt
That will help you out

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2002-10-23 05:09 PM


It's always best to think before you speak, so as not to cause hurt feelings, including your own.  Good write!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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2 posted 2002-10-23 07:43 PM


Julie, this is very, very true. I enjoyed this. Thanks.
~~Love To All~~
~~Ethel~~

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2002-10-23 10:47 PM


I know the feeling Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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4 posted 2002-10-23 10:52 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always think before you act and talk to one you trust before you pass the word on in case one has a second opinion of it is right or not! (big hugggsssssss) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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5 posted 2002-10-23 10:53 PM


right on

Consider yourself fuzzed

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-10-23 11:46 PM


Writing is such an excellent outlet for the emotions... I'm glad to see you using it, Julie...
It has helped me so much to write out my tears as well as my joys
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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