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Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2002-10-23 04:17 PM

you're not here today
and my body is hungry for your kisses
please do not be offended
if I pretend that this book I'm writing
in, is your body; here, to please me

Oh, my love,
I kiss you and kiss you
softly and methodically, at first
but now, my heart; my love
I am slightly losing control
my kisses have become the products of
a speeding freight train;
each spark of a thousand roaring
steel wheels, is a kiss

there are more sparks
-more kisses-
than I can count
O my heart, my only,
please tell me you feel;
you felt
my going crazy for you
on this page

**** **** ****

..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-23 04:21 PM

I love it. All the feeling and emotion. Well done

Cold hands means a warm heart

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

2 posted 2002-10-23 05:27 PM

..the_loner_23../\..thanks for reading; i

appreciate the kind words../\..Spiros
-------------calm seas----------

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-23 11:45 PM

(smiles) Oh Spiros, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, such passion fills your wonderful words, I love the magic you conjure to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

4 posted 2002-10-24 12:18 PM

..Mistletoe Angel../\..thanks for reading;

you are very kind../\..Spiros

---------------twilight-----

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-24 08:25 AM

Spiros, being this incurable romantic that I am....this is my favorite type poem. It was beautiful and I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2002-10-24 09:24 AM

..garysgirl../\..thank u; very kind of u to

read and comment../\..Spiros

------------poetry-------

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-10-24 06:40 PM

Wonderfully done!

[This message has been edited by Martie (10-24-2002 08:50 PM).]

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