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LiquidSilver
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Within the moonbeams ~*

0 posted 2002-10-23 03:44 PM


Like a showdown. I
Come down the steps with
My eyes poised on my
Cat.  She looks back
With violent eyes.  Slowly and
Carefully I reach down to
Grasp her around the waist.
Immediate howls of torture
Tear from her little lips.  I
Smile, knowing that I have
Got her!  Muaha!  Dashing
Into the bathroom, the door
Slams behind us.  Oh, how I
Can hear her murderous
Howls.  I drop her into the
Tub.  Grinning almost instantly
At the wet rat sitting lopsidedly there
Coldly staring up at me through yellowish hues.
Gently, I wash that silky
Furr.  Time does pass, howls
Dissolve.  A clean kitty arises.
* If any of you have a cat.  Then you full well know what I speak of.   Teehee.*

Liquid Silver


"An it harm none, do as thou wilt"

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Radrook
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1 posted 2002-10-23 03:53 PM


Very vividly described!

Enjoyed the read.

Thanks for sharing.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-23 04:03 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I know this feeling so well, and the kittens look so cute after they had a bath too, yay! (smiles) Match, love, game, you win, but the kittens win too when they are aqueaky clean! This s gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-10-23 04:17 PM


Very well done!
Some fantastic imagery here.
Much enjoyed the chuckles this afternoon.
~Hugs~


*Nice signature!*

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-10-23 04:23 PM


LOL I go through that when I have to give them medicine too. Very well done.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-10-23 09:19 PM



My pure white cat, Samantha, would have never allowed for a bath...but I so enjoyed this poem!  Thanks for sharing!

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-23 09:24 PM


Oh, yes!--indeed I do! You've recreated a living nightmare! hehe

EA

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