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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-23 03:15 PM


He said,
with you?
it's just a game
a test to
love you anyway
and I replied,
it's not the same?

Is it not so
with everyone?
I am not the only one...
are you not here
pleasing me?
you want me
to whisper your name...

as he looked down
at his notes
I told him
that was but scapegoat
avoidance
of the "me" in me...

He signed the chart
and set me free...

I grinned.
He signed.
Reluctantly.
repost...perhaps just to remind myself?



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-10-23 03:22 PM


Karen I do like this one....and I am glad that you reposted it!!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
2 posted 2002-10-23 03:44 PM


Transference is in the mind of the beholder.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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