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Toerag
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0 posted 2002-10-23 03:07 PM


Against a lovely sunset,
A beautiful mountain view,
Beauty uncomparable,
Romantically shared by two.

It wasn't their first encounter,
They'd loved so much before,
Each time better than the last,
Who could ask for more?

Their bodies lovingly entertwined,
Now "one" in love together,
As the sun sets down in color,
Their love should last forever.

Their committments sealed in romance,
Their love is never ending,
A honeymoon in Maui
A new life now beginning.

It's such a touching love song,
One that should endure,
Pee Wee Hermann and Larry C,
May your love last thru the years.



© Copyright 2002 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-10-23 03:35 PM


He shows no dignity or respect,
But then who cares, what the heck?
You can have your fun and make merry,
Cause we'll all still laugh, even Larry!

So sticks and stone may break my bones,
But Toerag always gets the moans.
And your words will never hurt me,
For you can run and you can hide...
But there's a posse out to get thee.

ROTFLMBO Again!


[This message has been edited by Larry C (10-23-2002 03:37 PM).]

Toerag
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2 posted 2002-10-23 03:42 PM


Larry, there's alway been some kind of puss....I mean...Posse out to get me....LOL....Hope things are well with ya my friend...know it hasn't been an easy year......love the banter...take care..
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-10-23 03:45 PM


my my... this reminds me of the preteen years when boys and girls start to like each other and want to show it but can't. I'm not too sure you two don't have ahidden crush on each other and are secretly showing your attraction to one another using the denial tactics of picking fun at each other..if I didn't know better I'd say that love song was written by toe to larry, but toe being shy just wanted to insert someone else in place of him despite his secret longings...


It's OK fella's you can come out of the closet now..we'll all still love you and accept you...

(chuckling)

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-10-23 03:47 PM


Isn't it called the Toerag Shuffle?
suthern
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5 posted 2002-10-23 03:50 PM


LARRY!!!! *shocked expression* I thought you had better taste than that!!! *G*

On the other hand... you're in Maui... *G* I think even I would look good after enough Mai Tai's! LOL

This is great, sweets... even if I am ROTFLMAO @ Cpat!!! LOL

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-23 04:04 PM


Well you have all entertained me--Toe, Larry, Cpat, Suthern... hahaha!

Toe, this truly was a beautiful love poem that you wrote for Larry (I'm with Cpat, Peewee was just a cover tehe---and I am not about to forget this!*! tehe)

You are a very fine writer but you can't resist adding the Toerag signature---the twist of humor at the end!

Linda

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7 posted 2002-10-23 04:12 PM


Mr. Toe, this poem is   SOOO  beautiful. If I hadn't seen the title, I would have thought it was to your wife or Suthern!!! I'm sure, though, that Larry  LOVES  it. HeeHee!!


Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-23-2002 04:14 PM).]

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-10-23 10:17 PM


Toerag - a most great ending. Loved it...

BC

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9 posted 2002-10-23 10:44 PM




(giggles in delight) You forgot to mention instead of riding a horse-drawn carriage they rode Pee-Wee Herman's bicycle to the beach as a romantic vessel! LOL! (big hugggsssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, yay, we're so happy for you both, ROTFL, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-10-23 11:39 PM


Well, that explains Larry's T-shirt....Pulling For Peewee...
Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-10-24 12:04 PM



Shame on you, Mr.Toe!!!!!

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Tammy Blessing
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12 posted 2002-10-24 02:48 PM


You are all truly incorrigable!! But your also a lot of fun to read!! Thanks for the laughs!
Tammy

SimplyGold
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13 posted 2002-10-24 03:24 PM


Gee Guys,

What a rip you all are and so000 entertaining.

SG

LngJhnAg
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14 posted 2002-10-25 12:05 PM


I think "Peewee" is an apt description for Toe.  He's famous for what he doesn't have - heh.
Toerag
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15 posted 2002-10-25 12:21 PM


Note to self: Burn LongJohn a new one soon......yep...got it on my list of things to do....
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