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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-23 12:43 PM



Jetison of air in form,
tiny bubble shot to surface
inside the liquid red, candle
burning atop, my now
cluttered desk.

An odd show of burst
of color fluidity
where flame floats atop
and color bubbles neath.

Smell of sensual, raspberry-
vanilla mix, somewhere in-between,
somewhere betwixt, aromatherapy
in the space of write.

I think the bubbles, yes
the bubbles of color,
would be worth the write alone.

WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-10-23 12:49 PM


only you can say it that way, I love this one!
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-23 01:44 PM


I love it as usual Anne.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-10-23 01:57 PM


Very well worth the write I would say Anne.  Loved it.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-10-23 02:03 PM


I love how you have the ability to take something so seemingly simple and write it into something special, to be enjoyed by others.

EA

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5 posted 2002-10-23 11:27 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful, sweet friend, yes, always captivate the beauty of the bubbles first then go from there from poem to poem and unravel the beauty within the dessert from which it comes! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-10-23 11:31 PM


Thanks for the relaxing and lovely bubble bath, Anne...  Its just what I needed
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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