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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-10-23 09:50 AM



Wearing the Mem'ries

I awake mornings with softness, in feel
from nighttime dreaming, intensely of real.
The blue of your eyes, I'm dressed in today,
wearing the feeling of mem'ries this way.

Do you believe, in my thoughts I express?
The wants, the desires inside me compress
to the fill of my heart, to overflow, seep,
'til I'm wearing the mem'ries, inside that I keep.

Years have been passing too quickly for me,
yet times end is never, when you have the key
that can unlock those feelings, set free those restraints
loosen those chains, with the words that mind paints...

You coat me with warmth, in blue memory,
Left behind, mixed with mine, stitched in timeless of we.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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1 posted 2002-10-23 09:53 AM


Enjoyed the flow of this and its sweet, tender texture.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2002-10-23 09:54 AM


lovely.... may the blue of your day be the clear sky... and the key found again to unlick your dreams
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-10-23 09:59 AM


thank you Virginia..and hey C.... did you really mean "unlick"?

made me laugh at that slip of the keys...

hugss
M

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4 posted 2002-10-23 10:58 AM


well now... not sure that wasn't a freudian slip... always thought it odd he wore slips and they named them after him... and him..supposed to be telling the rest of us what was wrong with us... I'll tell you! Put him on one of the talk shows today and in a slip and see how many busts of him are displayed... well I guess if he wore a slip, busts might indeed also be shown... oh..

What was I saying.... oh yeah... nope didn't mean to type unlick... should have just been lick... that un part wasn't needed.


nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-10-23 11:05 AM


I wish you could be beside me right now and hear me laughing..I rarely laugh  aloud..but this whole response just broke me up..and I can't  stop myself...

haaa


too funny, C

M

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6 posted 2002-10-23 11:30 AM


oh my... I was funny? Must have been a total accident..I was being serious you know... darn... when I try to be funny I'm not, when I don't try people think I am... what a catch 22...

Glad I could give you a chuckle....



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By the sea
7 posted 2002-10-23 05:23 PM


I'm glad I happened up this, Maureen.  So tenderly written, so heartfelt.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2002-10-23 05:40 PM


Maureen,
One of your best, enjoyed.

Toerag
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9 posted 2002-10-23 05:59 PM


I've never "unlicked" anything myself?...But, I'm willing to try? This is very well done gal...
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2002-10-23 10:23 PM


nakdthoughts - you always write with your heart...

BC

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11 posted 2002-10-23 10:32 PM


enjoyed your writing as always

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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12 posted 2002-10-23 10:37 PM




(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you always write from the heart and I know these blue skies will beckon for you as long as you hold to heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2002-10-23 10:45 PM


Maureen...this has got to be your best write ever!
Enjoyed ever so much!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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By the Seaside
14 posted 2002-10-23 10:52 PM


You write from the heart and to the heart...
and I felt every word.

Stunning as always~

Hugging you Maureen~

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2002-10-26 10:02 PM


Auguste, I have  great inspiration always, Michael. Thank you
~smiling
M (I love your signature)

Sy,  you think so? then I am pleased you read it and responded. Thank you


Toerag "I've never "unlicked" anything myself?...But, I'm willing to try?" Haaa..I am not sure  who makes me laugh more, you or C
Thank you
M


Bill, yes I am much like you...
hugsss
M

Bernie, I enjoy your reading and responding to me. Thank you
~smiling~
M


Noah Dear, where  do you find the time to respond to almost everyone. Thank you for always being here.
hugss
Maureen

Nancy, I am glad you think so.
hugs and Thank you

Lori, I wish I could catch up with you, but I have had company (the whole family together at one time..a first in years...so I am taking a brief moment to respond and thank you for always sharing your heart with me.
huggssss
M



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