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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-10-23 08:10 AM


Dawn's Kiss

As sun does kiss the morning sky
I lip caress my love's soft cheek.
And marvel at this person so unigue.
In dawn's first light my heart does fly.

...believe what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2002-10-23 08:14 AM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may every coming dawn always greet you with the warmth of true love youn dote upon! (smiles) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-10-23 08:56 AM


Dang Scorpio!  
You sure know how to wake a girl up and make her take notice!
And what a wonderful way to greet the dawn this would be.
Sensual morning thoughts awaken in my mind this morning.
Much enjoyed ~ Morning Hugs

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-10-23 10:59 AM



And Sun would rise o'er quiet day
Unique blessing upon us makes,
For to rise as glory hies away,
It leaves its kiss, and nothing, takes

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4 posted 2002-10-23 11:03 AM


Scorpio, this is  SOOO  beautiful. I love the way you do this in such few words. Thanks for sharing your kiss of words this morning.
Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-23 12:15 PM


Your loving ways
Could fill all days
With sunny rays!

You do have a way with words, dear poet!

~ Every morning with you
  would be a good one! ~ te

EA

scorpio
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6 posted 2002-10-24 07:58 AM


Thank you..I'm pleased that you took the time to read and comment on this poem...

...believe what your heart feels...

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