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Open Poetry #23

Too Darn Hot

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-10-23 05:32 AM

Too Darn Hot

Why does that girl treat me the way
she does and the way she doesn't.
Sometimes she assumes the role
of beautiful positions and other
times she seems to be trying
out for a Hollywood audition.
I hate to be insistant but I
would love for her to be a
little more consistant and
a little less resistant.
But she wouldn't give a
penny for my thoughts.
That girl is too busy
thinking she's too
darn hot.

JamesLee
October22
2002

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-23 12:19 PM

Awesome write James

Cold hands means a warm heart

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-10-23 12:55 PM

I think I met her once.

Excellent.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-23 02:27 PM

(sad sigh) Oh James, this kind of thing happens a lot, it is far more important to be giving than to look giving and it seems much of the world today is immersed in being hot than being giving! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-23 02:33 PM

JamesMichael, this is so true. Much too often, we are more concerned with what's on the outside instead of what's on the inside. And we want the outside to shine, instead of our hearts to shine. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2002-10-23 02:41 PM

Quit licking her ear...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-10-23 04:54 PM

LOL@Toe...
Good write James...
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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