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Open Poetry #23

My Love So Sweet

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-10-23 05:18 AM

My Love So Sweet

As I look out over the horizon
as far as my eyes can see
I see the moon peeking through the
palm trees on the beaches of Waikiki.
I hear the tranquil sound of waves
breaking where shore and ocean meet.
I watch the moon's reflection brightly
shining as the gentle waves kiss my feet.
All this beauty I love to share
in the arms of my love so sweet.

JamesLee
Oct20
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (10-23-2002 05:22 AM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-23 12:20 PM

This is so sweet and beautiful. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-23 02:04 PM

Ohhhh, this is so sweet and beautiful, James Michael. Thanks so much for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-10-23 02:06 PM

Very beautiful James!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-23 02:29 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and may you and your love forever share a lifetime of sweetness under the Waikiki moon, sweet friend, I love it, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

5 posted 2002-10-23 08:33 PM

Something very special about the music this poem brings to me. Thank you very much.

etoodog

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-10-23 09:21 PM

James, I thank you again for bringing the beauty of Hawaii into my home via your descriptive poems---and the net!

Lovely to say the least!

Linda

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