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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-10-23 05:04 AM


Freda Just Sold
Another Property

Well now isn't she a
wonderful Real Estate lady.
Amazing how she sells
so many properties.
That's probably another
$5000 going into her
checking account.
Or possibly a much
larger amount.
Everytime someone sells
a house in this City
it seems like Freda
is sitting a little
more pretty.
I just got another
card in the mail.
Freda must be worth
at least a million
by now.

JamesLee
Oct19
2002


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VAS
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1 posted 2002-10-23 10:09 AM


So, let me think, is Freda someone from your lost past? Is this about envy or remorse? Too, too curious.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-23 11:12 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is powerful, sweet friend, I too thought the same thing as Virginia reading this, if this level has two meanings, one underlaying the other if this experience represents an emotion you feel inside from the past! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-10-24 12:42 PM


She must be doing something right, I hear the price of paradise doesn't come cheap.  I'll bet she goes to market with a pretty purse too.


hmmmm....now you got me thinking about sending out cards~  

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-24 12:51 PM


JamesMichael, this is a good write, and very interesting. But, like the others, I wonder if this is a love (past or present) or what? thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
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Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
5 posted 2002-10-24 11:11 AM


I hope i am wrong but i feel some spite hear, but i did enjoy it. :-)

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-10-29 03:50 AM


Thank you Vas, Noah, Blues Seranade, garysgirl and buerlon for responding...
Freda is just a local real estate lady that sends me cards in the mail telling me how many properties she is selling...I have never met her and never seen a picture of her but I have no doubt she is a millionaire and I kindof would like to meet her but obviousely for the wrong reasons...she does remind me of an old girlfriend of mine from California.
Maybe next time I buy or sell a house I should call Freda.
Yes, I want her money...all of it...Freda where are you...come to me...ha..ha...James

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