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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-10-22 09:36 PM



Colour Me Scarlet

There are those who wear innocence always
Who never succumb to sin’s persuasive ways
There are others who don’t always slip
But on occasion will sometimes trip
More rarely still there are those like me
Who can’t be innocent at all clearly
Whenever there’s temptation I am there
Life’s opportunity to sin is so unfair

It’s not that I don’t know what is right
It’s simply I can’t see sin’s warning light
I can’t resist the urge to do something wrong
I know well the melody of sin’s siren song
When trouble beckons I’m there tout suite
But its only certain sins I hasten to meet
I’m not as black as the dark of night
Just a little too keen to taste sin’s delight

Just because I simply can’t say no
There’s no reason to assume to sin I will go
I don’t offer harm in my rather devilish way
Nor do I give pain I’m happy to say
Imagine, if you will, that I was always good
Silly isn’t it I can’t be only as I should
I lean towards trouble because that’s what I am
I’m not Snow White more a scarlet woman

This isn’t an excuse, just the truth of me
Truly my friend I’m simply flighty

Marsha


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-22 09:38 PM


This is a great poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Kethry
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2 posted 2002-10-22 09:43 PM


Mushy,
you weren't too flighty when you flew half way round the world to meet in Tampa, in fact the way I heard it you, weren't flighty at all unless your feet were nailed to the ground to hold you down and not out of fear.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Marsha
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3 posted 2002-10-22 10:30 PM


Keth beloved heart YOU traitor you aren't supposed to tell them all that...........

How perfectly perfidious you are 'tis just as well you know I adore you and won't exact terrible revenge


Besides it is only slightly true
Love you always
Slushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-10-22 10:39 PM


Marsha - perhaps it's well that you're there, and I'm here...

BC

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5 posted 2002-10-23 12:58 PM


its a bit full of what i almost saw as inside jokes. thats cool - understand, but it leaves most feeling left out.

great title though - that is what got me to read it. i am so new i don't know any of the "personalities" on the boards.

~K
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6 posted 2002-10-23 02:25 AM


I have ALWAYS preferred Rose Red over Snow White!
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-10-23 05:24 AM


Reminds me of the times when I find myself thinking to myself...I would be doing a lot more if I had more opportunities...James
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8 posted 2002-10-23 11:51 AM


"Frankly, Scarlet ... I don't give a" darn !

LOL !
MarshaLove ... you KNOW I couldn't resist~

Sin On Love Child !  Tee-Hee !

Me wub you !
*Huggers*
~*Marge*~

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9 posted 2002-10-23 03:05 PM


So YOU were that lady in dress of deepest red who went sashaying through and left these blue pages empty as every breathing male followed! LOL

Mushy's bad... and so very very good at it! LOL

This is delightful, lady... I can just hear you speaking the words. *S*

Spiros Zafiris
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10 posted 2002-10-23 03:53 PM


..Marsha../\.well-written and lyric..enjoyed

reading../\..Spiros

----------------------trees-----

Krissy
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11 posted 2002-10-23 08:18 PM


mum excellent writing even though you are the real scarlet. This  is lovely and very warm indeed You always seam to impress me and this is outstanding. Beautiful work, exquisite writing,

Very well written


love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2002-10-24 07:26 PM


well you do look lovely in red..or black or  purple..*s  after all I slept with your clothes..I became accustomed to their look..*s

hugss
M

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13 posted 2002-10-24 07:39 PM




(sigh) Oh Marsha, I think there's a little bit of that vermillon in all of us, just as we all have an imp that hides in all our back pockets! (big hugggssssss) Though I believe everyone has a dark side, you have so much light and love to share and you are a delightful friend to us all, and it never hurts to have just a pinch of the original sin, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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14 posted 2002-10-24 07:45 PM


enjoyed
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