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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-10-22 08:40 PM


“I’LL SHARE WITH YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Darkness came, I looked, and I asked why,
heard the wind whistling through the trees,
shadows in the graveyard, lights flickering,
these sounds, perhaps abnormalities…

Behind the tombstone someone moving,
scared the you know whazz it out of me,
geez, I made the wrong turn this night,
I was shaking uncontrolled, and sincerely…

Noises from here, there, everywhere,
lost my watch, it must be midnight,
out in the middle of the graveyard, dang,
trapped, wonder if they have an appetite…

Then above the sound of the night winds,
could that be music, blues I’m hearing,
ghoul dancing they be, sweet beslippered,
well not now tonight, I’m not abandoning…

So I rubbed mud stuff all over my face,
I really had my dancing shoes on this time,
u’gggg, I grabbed a ghoulmiss, started juking,
why honey, I’d bounce with you anytime...

Now one has to realize or something like that,
what’s the moral of this goings on here,
dang if I know, but I’ll share with you,
come and join us, heck there’s balladeer…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-10-22 08:57 PM



Absolutely goul-ish...or was that goulashe...
Great write for a night in October!
Best Wishes, ThisDiamond

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-10-22 09:01 PM


Ah Bill...this is too cute!
and you don't scare me one bit...
Fun read,..much enjoyed tonight.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2002-10-22 09:35 PM


very cool October stew, was it me or was it you.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-10-22 09:52 PM


BC ~

This time the thrills came from the graveyard instead of from your words of romantic love!

Enjoyed your ventures into the dark side.

Linda

Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2002-10-22 10:39 PM


Bill darling heart it is spooky and wonderful you are an incredible writer. You scared me and made me smiled I loved it.

Fabulous utterly utterly fabulous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-22 11:56 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I love this new twist in this poem, no matter what your words are always a keeper, I smiled reading this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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