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Mystic Mystron
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since 2002-02-15
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North York .Ontario

0 posted 2002-10-22 07:36 PM




The boxes are packed
The dishes stored
All our memories
All our things
Packed in a truck
Destined for a new start
We have come this far
And with each other
We will make it through
A new start, with new memories
One's to take on our next move.

You are a good poet as soon as you try to reach others with your words.
You are a great poet when those same words touch your heart first.

© Copyright 2002 Wilfred Gardner - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-10-22 07:45 PM


Great upbeat write Wilfred!!
Enjoyed much!
~Hugs~

*On a more personal note..
The Wiz and I wish you and the family
all the best in your new location.
Please stay in touch and drop by
or call when in the neighbourhood.*
~ Magical wishes! ~

**Hey..does it have a dungeon?**

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-22 07:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Wilfred, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I am glad to hear you're finally settled in your new home and hope all is well! Yay! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Wilfred, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-10-22 09:01 PM


May love light your way. ThisDiamond
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-10-22 09:02 PM


May love light your way. ThisDiamond
scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
5 posted 2002-10-22 09:05 PM


I hope all goes well for you and the move proves profitable on all fronts..

...believe what your heart feels...

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