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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-22 11:06 AM



You know, if you could drift
into the flame with me, we
could hold each other through
the rage, let the heat of flame
burn it all away.

I'll hold your hand if you like
and if need be I'll cover you
with the moisture of my life
to shelter you from death
as we peruse the depths
of the flame's abyss.

Oh, what heated dreams of passion
we may find if we go deep.

WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-22 01:52 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is sooooo sensually gorgeous, sweet friend, may you find much special gifts within the flame and may your moth of destiny keep coming and giving presence to your light, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-10-22 09:04 PM


The mood of exploration...nice write.
ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-10-22 10:11 PM


Your poem was so hot that it melted my monitor!

EA

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-10-23 01:09 AM


Thanks all for commenting. This one was a little demented. I think I'm just burning too many candles over here.  Again, thanks for reading and responding.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-03 01:30 AM


Oh, what heated dreams of passion
we may find if we go deep.


Indeed Indeed!

Still burning those candles?

Enjoyed Ms Rose

Maree


WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-12-04 08:51 AM


Maree, I'm still burning those candles. Thanks for bringing this one up from the back pages, it is most appreciated.
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