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camdlanor
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since 2002-10-22

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0 posted 2002-10-22 04:44 AM

AWAKENING

I thought of you last night,
                   I thought of you;
You stole upon whisp of faint surprise
And suddenly appeared before my eyes,
Invading dream and perilous event
You swept across in heavenly assent.
Ere long my sunken pits of pebbled skree
Lay dormant and abandoned o'er the bed,
No rumbled soundings to awaken thee
No cache of hidden treasure overhead.
From dim and darkened caverns ever deep
Come haunts of doubt, and hidden bowls of fear,
Ganglia forms baring the soul from sleep
To hide the undefined, the ever near.
We chase the wilted terminals of time,
Accept the moulding, cold inconstancy
Of all that's gone before, supreme, sublime,
To seed our plains of anonimity.
I thought of you last night,
                         I thought of you,
Yet saw you, distant, faraway, remote,
Your bouquets central nature, deep, arcane,
Somewhere between the silence and the pain.

Ron Kaye August 2002

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-10-22 06:04 AM

A wonderful first post and the last line wraps it up so well. Well done and welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your time here at Passions. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Welcome!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-10-22 06:58 AM

A wondrous write, soft with longing, a stolen moment...Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-22 08:01 AM

(sigh) This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I love it, such yearning fills your words as does a haunting of something you left behind that echoes back to you in spirit, this is excellent, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ron, may you be inspired by al of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-10-22 08:32 AM

Welcome, and I too, look forward to reading more of your poetry.

This was stunning!

Thanks very much,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-10-22 08:36 AM

camdlanor
A very nice write, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-10-22 10:51 AM

Welcome! A very soft cry in this.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-10-22 11:44 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Beautiful first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-10-22 12:10 PM

welcome to passions

enjoyed this

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-10-22 12:43 PM

Welcome to Passions!! Enjoy yourself here. Lovely first post. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2002-10-22 10:28 PM

"I thought of you last night,
I thought of you,
Yet saw you, distant, faraway, remote,
Your bouquets central nature, deep, arcane,
Somewhere between the silence and the pain."

this is so great, kind of reads like a song

Welcome

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

11 posted 2002-10-22 11:05 PM

Welcome to our family. I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from you!

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

12 posted 2002-10-23 12:02 PM

Wow!, Some very poignant words here. Welcome to Passions and look forward to reading more of your works.

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

13 posted 2002-10-23 12:12 PM

Yes Welcome to Pip as with the rest I too look forward to more of your words on these pages...

Consider yourself fuzzed

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

14 posted 2002-10-23 02:38 PM

A beautiful entrance into the Pip family. I am so glad I found this and look forward to reading more.

Dawn

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