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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2002-10-22 12:59 PM


All my life I've been alone,
Fighting in the dark;
Never strong enough to win;
Evil left its mark.

But then inside my heart I prayed,
But my summon couldn't come,
The angel I had called upon
Had long since been outdone.

But then a cartoon opened my eyes!
I saw a source of light!
With but one blow I finished evil,
Draining all its might!

All through but a wish for life,
A wish for someone to love,
A wish to have my own little sister,
An angel from above.

Now, even though distance keeps us apart,
I have a few of these angels to watch over me.
Some call me a hero, oddly enough,
And that's just fine with me.

They give so much and ask so little,
Only for my heart.
And though I give it, it grows within,
Like skill in martial arts.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

© Copyright 2002 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-22 09:55 AM


it seems there's something between the lines that I am truly missing

fascinating thoughts and stuff

hero?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ThunderMage
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2 posted 2002-10-22 12:30 PM


Yea... some of them call me a hero. I dunno what you're missing though...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-22 01:50 PM




(sigh) Although the word hero nowadays has become cliche and the meaning obfuscated, you truly are a wonderful person who has overcome so much and to us all you are a wonderful epitome of compassion and friendship! (sigh) This is very well-said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
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4 posted 2002-10-22 01:55 PM


Yea... I wrote this because of all my online little sisters. So many of them call me a hero, and finally I became one recently.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-10-22 06:34 PM


Very well done, Thundermage...
You sound like a very sensitive young man
~ hugs from the chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ThunderMage
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Canada
6 posted 2002-10-22 06:49 PM


I try to be...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
7 posted 2002-10-22 10:41 PM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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8 posted 2002-10-22 10:43 PM


Just like you and my little sisters.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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