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Open Poetry #23

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Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2002-10-22 12:31 PM

above tidal roar
silver clouds veil half moon -
footprints linger

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2002-10-22 06:08 AM

I like this Beki...curious - what does the title mean to you??

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-10-22 06:15 AM

This reminds me of a soft walk on the beach in the moonlight. Very well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2002-10-22 08:00 AM

Economy of words expressing beautiful images...I like this poem....very much...

...believe what your heart feels...

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-10-22 08:26 AM

I like this poem, too. I've done that.

You did accomplish a lot in so few words.

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-10-22 08:30 AM

Beki
Good thought, good write, good read.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 2002-10-22 11:12 PM

thanks everyone - the title is just the first letter of weach line - it ishow I label my haiku as haiku is tradionally without titles

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