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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-10-21 10:09 PM


           and an owl questions
her silhouette

               she turns

her eyes wet
           answering with the moon

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scorpio
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1 posted 2002-10-21 10:27 PM


Ah...you know owls...well written...the image was created in my mind..Brian

...believe what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2002-10-21 11:52 PM


The moon so full, even on this day of her namesake--can't compete with the fullness of my heart.

iamyou....

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3 posted 2002-10-22 12:00 PM




This took me to a sigh.

[This message has been edited by Martie (10-22-2002 12:01 AM).]

Robert Adamson
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4 posted 2002-10-22 06:24 AM


A vivid October picture that I remember well from my childhood days of walking alone at night. I feel young again. Thank you.

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5 posted 2002-10-22 08:59 AM


ah......

more to this than image. Captured in so few words.... good stuff Brian..

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6 posted 2002-10-29 02:04 PM


Submit this,
maintenant!

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7 posted 2002-10-29 03:18 PM



Merci...

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8 posted 2002-10-29 03:50 PM


Yes...Yes she does
Wonderful! ThisDiamond

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