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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-21 09:37 PM


“LULLABY SOFT”
~~~~
Breezes caress
the rain on your
face which sings
of melodies,
words flow with
your lullaby soft,
as I read
unknown verses…
~~~~
by Bill Charles


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-21 09:40 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, such breezes always fill your lovely words, may your love always be the wind beneath your wings carrying you to the heights of heavens! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-21 09:40 PM


BC~ every word is perfect...it's gentle and soothing....LOVED this one!!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-10-21 09:42 PM


Love this Bill ~ Hugs!

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-10-21 10:10 PM


Very Beautiful...

Enjoyed this so much....


DeaDiAmore

scorpio
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5 posted 2002-10-21 10:22 PM


Written with heart and soul, Bill...wonderful words crafted to touch...softly.

...believe what your heart feels...

ShadowRider
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6 posted 2002-10-21 10:38 PM


Wasn't the Moody Blues that said:
And the sound we make together
Is the music to the story in your eyes
It's been shining down upon me now
I realize
"

If it is possible for a lullabye to cry,
it would weep joytears at the sound of
your voice, reciting lyrics of the heart.
Jeff

[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (10-21-2002 10:39 PM).]

Ivy Rose
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7 posted 2002-10-22 11:45 PM


Bill...There is such a gentleness in this poem. Sings a lullabye of love through time and unknown verse. Truly beautiful...as it always is.  ***Ivy Rose

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (10-22-2002 11:46 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-10-22 11:58 PM


soft...sky...lullaby...helen
FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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9 posted 2002-10-22 11:58 PM


enjoyed

Consider yourself fuzzed

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10 posted 2002-10-23 01:26 PM


Lovely!
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11 posted 2002-10-23 01:37 PM


Bill, another of those beautiful poems written in such few words. Thanks for sharing your heart, sweet Bill.
Love To All,
Ethel

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12 posted 2002-10-23 01:40 PM



Laying verse aside
to listen to the rain
just to hear
you, again

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2002-10-23 01:57 PM


Your words are as soft and sweet as a baby's breath.

EA

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14 posted 2002-10-23 02:23 PM


Bill - this is so lovely!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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