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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-21 09:07 PM


“YOUR DEMEANOR”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
For some reason or another tonight,
I would love to do a southern dance…
Slip off with me under palm trees,
not asking for much, take a chance…

We’ll swing hips under the stars,
until dawn with Bahama Mama’s…
Let our minds take a soft twirl,
here we go with abracadabra’s…

I’d hold you tight under the moon,
in its beams with the shadows…
Become one with music of reggae,
swaying like one, as the breeze flows…

Softness of you shows, as we touch,
delicacy is of your demeanor…
Your lips moist in southern skies,
mine to melt, as you capture…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-21 09:09 PM


Mmmm sounds like a Samba to me...
Love it Bill.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2002-10-21 09:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your poems just keep getting more better everytime, you are  a true modern Romeo, may the reggae breezes always fondle your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-21 09:19 PM


Oooh Bill, I want one of those fancy drinks with the tiny paper umbrellas in them!! Then we'll trip the light fantastic. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-10-21 09:24 PM


I want one too!  But,  nope....I don't want the next dance....ok?

Nicely done BC..as always...

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