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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2002-10-21 07:58 PM


I See You
  
  
Wet by refreshing rain
from a dark cloud’s passage
I see you
standing resolute
with blue eyes
under blue skies
dripping with prisms of color
  
You look marvelous
in a rainbow !
  
  
  
  
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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2002-10-21 08:09 PM


sir...you have me singing...sigh songs...helen
Suetang
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2 posted 2002-10-21 08:30 PM


Absolutely stunning images portrayed through your words, so very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

regards2you
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3 posted 2002-10-21 08:40 PM


I love sparkling clean, of the soul, the heart and the mind.

I love this poem, as well.

Thank You, it seems to make me grin!

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-21 08:58 PM


S Arthur Grey, I love this rainbow that you presented to us. It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-22 09:03 AM


gentle image and certainly appreciated on this grey morning...

I enjoyed

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2002-10-22 12:32 PM


bump
scorpio
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7 posted 2002-10-22 01:56 PM


Simply a fun read.Light and uplifting...A little rain never hurt anyone...Especially if a rainbow appears after.

...believe what your heart feels...

Auguste
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8 posted 2002-10-23 05:36 PM


Perfect!  
*Stubby*
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9 posted 2002-10-23 07:04 PM


Beautiful J

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2002-10-23 08:52 PM



And this looks marvelous
under your name!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2002-10-23 09:13 PM



This is charming, pure, sweet---truly a gem!

EA

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