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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-21 03:07 PM

Mountain of wind,
stones looming cloudward,
frostlining snow.

Fleured among crowns,
evergreening tops,
hushed scent of cold.

White senseless prints,
thickening ice pines.
Sound is a ghost.

Smoke spectre's breath.
Living lips issue
flowers of chill.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-21-2002 03:12 PM).]

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-10-21 03:11 PM

brrrrrr
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I like

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-10-21 03:18 PM

White senseless prints,
thickening ice pines.
Sound is a ghost.
yes it is... yes it is...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-21 03:48 PM

Mike, as soon as I saw the title, "Snow Walk", I bundled myself up with my scarf, gloves and down-filled ski jacket. You always portray anything that you write about so vividly, that I thought I'd better prepare myself for this walk in the snow---and I'm glad I did!

I was actually there---feeling, seeing, experiencing....

Linda

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-10-21 04:04 PM

Mikey - thankyou for this wonderfully chilly piece of work. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-10-21 05:09 PM

Thanks everyone. This was inspired by a hiking memory.

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

6 posted 2002-10-21 05:27 PM

Very Beautiful...I love this one M.

H.

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

7 posted 2002-10-21 07:18 PM

Thanks, I was gleefully able to take a walk as a child again.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-10-21 09:43 PM

"hushed scent of cold"

very cool line

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-10-21 09:53 PM

bsquirrel - a'hhhh, winters chill, you write about it well...

BC

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