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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-21 02:17 PM



I remember the castles
painted upon the landscape.
Beautiful post card images
of real life, far away, yet
close enough to take it all in
and feel a sense of foreboding.

A playful sense of the macabre there.
Wrapped up in the style of the time
bell bottoms and fringe, your arms
around me and the smell of autumn
in your clothes, as you held me
oh so close, a memory..dark

slightly edged in gray, for what
we didn't see that day.

WhiteRose 10/21/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-10-21 05:47 PM


WhiteRose,
I love the contrasts in this portrait.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Robert Adamson
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2 posted 2002-10-21 07:05 PM


I was attracted by the title. I like the idea that you may have many many post cards. Thank you for this image.
regards2you
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3 posted 2002-10-21 08:49 PM


White Rose, the last few lines touched me deeply.

Very well written.

Thanks, (I think) ( big smile)

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-21 08:52 PM


Anne, this is a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-21 10:07 PM




(smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, yay, I love it, and may these postcards always be sent to your heart with kindest regards, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-10-21 10:55 PM


Much Enjoued J...*S*...
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