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Open Poetry #23

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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-10-21 07:04 AM

You turn to look for,
But I have gone out the door,
Listening to screams
That have shattered all my dreams
While tears streak my cheek,
I face you not because I’m weak,
But because I’m strong,
And know I must move along,
Away from what’s you
Away from all that you do,
Back to where I came,
Before I become insane
Staying listening to screams.

Gloom

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-10-21 07:09 AM

may I use this?

once again

you write the inner rage

of a cold hand clasping

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-10-21 07:15 AM

Thank you, serenity blaze,
Yes you may use it if you desire,
Although I’m not so sure just how you mean use it,
But I am pleased that you like it.

Gloom

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-21 01:47 PM

Not a very pleasant situation, to say the least! I don't scream at others and I certainly couldn't handle others screaming at me.

It's so sad when civil communication breaks down and the beast within rants and rages thereby furthering the alienation of one from the other.

This was almost painful for me to read.---That is effective writing!

EA

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