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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA 
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Breaks over orange-red leaves Straight to Poplar trees Sprinkling Bright whites Laughing Without pain etoodog |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert, Welcome to Passions! A good greet for me this cool October morn...Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very very nice...welcome to Passions. Maree  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous and colorful debut, sweet friend, and may autumns beauty fill the poplars and your heart with joy this season, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Robert, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Robert, what a delightful piece, almost like a leaf falling softly. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Robert..Welcome to Passions! I'm very sure you will love it here. Enjoyed your first post very much. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Welcom...This is a lovely fall poem. I look forward to future posts aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Robert, this is a lovely first post with the colors you've painted here of Autumn. WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY!!!!! I hope that you like it here as much as I have these past few weeks (almost a month, now). I think you will. I can kind of tell it in your poem and your little comment about the "Constructive Critiques" where your name is......"I am used to a D-grade". Seriousness with a bit of humor. Anyway, I am looking forward to more of your work. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-21-2002 10:01 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Robert - Welcome to Passions!! Enjoy yourself here. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions! Your new home away from home! I am a Leo, astrologically speaking, so your title "Sun" caught my attention! Your poem is delightful--and it was about one of my other favorite things--poplar trees. When I was growing up, we had a stand of poplar trees in our back yard and I loved to see the play of the sun and the summer breezes through their leaves. I'm sure you will be as happy here among kindred spirits as I have been! Earth Angel |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Enjoyed this powerful little poem. Powerful images make this poem a special one. Nice to see fresh, new work. Believe me, you will find no one here who is not gifted in some way...the poets here are all out-standing. Welcome!!!! Ivy Rose |
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