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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-20 10:57 PM


It is hard
To wait up on the person
You love
When you are so tired

But you know
That within the next hour
He could be coming
So you try to stay awake

The hour is past
And still no sign
But you keep waiting up
Until you see a sign

After 2 hours of waiting
You decide to go to bed
It is right at that moment
He decides to finally show
So you stay awake instead

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-20 11:03 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, I think we all go through that similar experience, my Joanna has a tendency to come up sometimes early at 2 or 3 A.M her time and it isn't that bad because we have a two-hour time difference but I stay up late nevertheless to talk to her! (big hugggssssss) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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2 posted 2002-10-20 11:20 PM


It's something that can't be helped. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to show my true colours...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-10-20 11:21 PM



I would find that disrespectful behavior if a man made a habit of arriving late. Personally, I will not spend time with a man who doesn't honor me and treat me with the respect I deserve. I am a very easy going person but a relationship should be mutually loving and respectful--and if it's not---it doesn't work for me.

Communicating your feelings is of the utmost importance for a successful relationship.

Take Care
EA

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-21 02:11 AM


Julie, I hope that your love doesn't do this to you. That's bad to have to WAIT  for someone all the time. When I was in that abusive situation years ago, I was always waiting for him....all the time. I hope this changes for you, sweet Julie. Thanks for sharing your poerm.


Love To All,
Ethel

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21
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5 posted 2002-10-21 03:54 AM


There seems to be an ache in someone's heart here and I can't wait to feel it.
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
6 posted 2002-10-21 06:14 PM


If you want someone to show up... take your makeup off... thats always when they arrive.
At least thats the way its always happened for me...
This is a cute poem
~ sleepy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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