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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-10-20 10:22 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

Save a place for me in heaven
Where the sky is forever blue
Where nothing bad can touch us
And love lives on in me and you

Spare me from this sorrow
For I have endured so much pain
It's time to stop this fighting
For ultimately no one will gain

Give me fields of green to run through
Allow my spirit to be set free
Far away from all this horror
Is where I desperately want to be

A place that's safe for our children
Is all I wish for at this time
Has life simply lost all meaning?
For there seems no reason or rhyme

Comfort me in my sadness
Hold my hand through times of grief
So many images will forever haunt me
My mind is in total disbelief

A world of love and compassion
Filled with peace and harmony
That's the place I've always dreamed of
So won't you come there now with me?

* * *

We are all angels with only one wing......
we can fly only by embracing each other.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-20 10:32 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, all your words are flowing with love in all its purity and the ending really touched my heart as together we all can become angels and fly to find that place above the clouds! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the wonderful artwork you're sharing from Josephine is quickly becoming one of my favorite painters, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-21 12:01 PM


Sue, this is so beautiful. Yes, isn't Heaven going to be a wonderful place....no more tears or sorrows....nothing bad or hurtful....no sickness or pain. thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-10-21 01:58 AM


Sue,
Well said and hugs to you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2002-10-21 06:17 AM


Sue a lovely and beautiful write.  You have a gentleness about you that thouches the heart.  Well done sweetie.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2002-10-21 09:15 AM


'...We are all angels with only one wing......
we can fly only by embracing each other...'

Sue, Let us embrace each other; it's the only way to save our world.

This poem is definitely a keeper and so beautifully written. You have such a caring and emotional heart.  I just love your description of Heaven; if only we could have this here on Earth.

Hugs, Marti

[This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (10-23-2002 09:38 AM).]

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-10-21 09:39 AM


Sue,
breathtakingly beautiful poem and fabulous images. I hope you are hot homesick for heaven.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-10-21 06:21 PM


Sue:  Such a heart-felt poem and something we all look forward to, being together in Heaven.

Betty Lou Hebert

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-10-21 06:38 PM


Tears decorate my hugs to you, Sue...
This poem made me cry, but I loved it...
especially those last 2 lines
~ angel hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-10-23 04:44 AM


You reminded me of why I desire heaven so much...James
Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2002-10-24 02:19 AM


Sue~ A wonderful poem and outlook for what the future holds...Paul
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11 posted 2002-10-24 07:22 PM


Sue - you write well of the metaphor of heaven - lots of things to cause us to stop and ponder these days - guess the heaven metaphor was invented for those times when just too much is going on that we can't handle - loved your poem - Paul
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12 posted 2002-10-24 07:51 PM


Oh Sue! Let's join hands and soar off to Heaven right now!
"A place that's safe for our children
Is all I wish for at this time"
I wish for this with all my heart! May we one day find Heaven on earth, and if not, well I'll meet you at the Pearly Gates!!
Tammy

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