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Come to me
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Come to me |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Come to me Dressed in your Doubt And let me bare Your secrets Come to me Draped in your Solitude And I’ll strip away Your yearning Come to me Wrapped in your Desire And we’ll uncover Your passion Come to me Wearing only Your want |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Okay. This is an invitation right?  It's lovely dear wranx, simply lovely |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
wranx - well now, this poem is going directly into my library. Enjoyed your words very much. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
Your good-- I love reading your poetry. That was just beautiful. caterina |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh myyy yesss! Sorry...you have rendered me completely speechless. Oh so very well done indeed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly have a way of getting a woman to strip down to her "want" and bare her secrets! Oh, yes! You certainly do! Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wranx, I love the way you put the facts in your mind and heart down on paper so boldly. You make everything perfectly clear, don't you?!? I also love the responses that you seem to pull out of people. You, my dear poet, are a delight. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
I'll bring the spaghetti o's  I couldn't resist *sigh* Consider yourself fuzzed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
damned if I didn't just grow fur...  sighs oh Ed...you tryin' to steal my heart? this could work...mmm...hmmm..it COULD. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx An excellent write, enjoyed. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is...quite the emotional disrobing... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Okay, now that you have us lined up, what are you going to do? lol Clearly, you are very good, as noted in your constructive critiques box, at decoupage, ~cause we're stuck on you~ This is great. Enjoyed it! Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
careful what you call for... the witch can explain more of that... but the poem..lovely.. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Did you imagine you would create this much sensation with one little poem!!?? LOL It's a good one. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sorry, this was meant for one, that alas, is gone from me now. I do appeciate all of the nice comments, though. Ed |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Wow! This one just caught my attention and held me captive. I was mesmerized by the power of this poem. |
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