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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2002-10-20 02:30 PM



dazzled by an early morning murmur
which seemed to sing as well as hum,
the halo, which surrounded their embrace,
was notified, by angelic forces-
to leave it through;
for it was sent by heavenly roses

yes, these kisses,
the angels allowed to bless their romance

        ****     ****     ****

..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros

© Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-20 02:33 PM




Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it, this is a heavenly debut, and may this love always kiss your heart and murmur the joys of life to you to eternity, God Bless You, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Spiros, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-20-2002 02:35 PM).]

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2002-10-20 02:48 PM


..Mistletoe Angel../\..thank you very much for the kind words and the welcome; this seems to be a very nice place..


../\..Spiros

------------------bluebirds-------

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-10-20 03:27 PM


Spiros,

This is a very beautiful poem. Welcome to Pip and please check your e mail for a very special message.

                        Dawn

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4 posted 2002-10-20 03:47 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very beautiful first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-10-20 03:54 PM


Welcome to Passions.  This is a beautiful first post and I am looking forward to seeing more.  thank you!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

caterina
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6 posted 2002-10-20 03:59 PM



Just lovely-- that first line is really nice btw as is the whole poem--  morning murmur-- beautiful...  it just seemed to stick with me.

caterina


garysgirl
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7 posted 2002-10-20 05:49 PM


Spiros, this is so romantic. I loved it. And to know that the embrace was bessed by angels made it so special. Thanks for sharing. And   WELCOME   TO   THIS  BIG   "FAMILY  OF  FRIENDS"    HERE   AT   PASSIONS  IN  POETRY. I've been here almost a month, now, and I love it very, very much. I'm sure that you will, too.

Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

Spiros Zafiris
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8 posted 2002-10-20 06:07 PM


..DawnG../\..Enchantress../\..Gentle Spirit..
/\..caterina../\.. + garysgirl../\..

..you are all so kind; thank you for reading

and commenting../\..Spiros


---------------------smiles of gratitude--

Ivy Rose
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9 posted 2002-10-20 06:36 PM


A very pure and tender poem. I enjoyed the romantic undertones, the spiritual undertones. ***Ivy Rose
Spiros Zafiris
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10 posted 2002-10-20 08:22 PM


..Ivy Rose../\..thanks for reading and

commenting; am grateful../\..Spiros


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