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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“GENTLEST ANGEL” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Never knew that a guardian, could be that caring… Speaking those soft words, which stopped the bleeding… Tenderness is her heart, which she carries inside… Mine was torn with sadness, all of the tears it cried… She gave me her comfort, to touch me if she could… Wanting to heal a broken soul, my desire was if she would… If I were with her to embrace, my warmth is hers tonight… The gentlest angel that I know, I would love her into the light… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes because it is so softly sensitive as all your words are and I believe for love to turns fears into joys is the ost special magic of love! (sigh) May your angel always bring you great warmth and comfort, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Bill, this is so beautiful my friend! your words light up the page, and i have to say both you and your angel are lucky. i hope you both get what you deserve, each other!! take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful and heart rendering write Bill. Very lovely. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Bill, enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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caterina Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 188Canada |
A soft and feel good kind of poem Bill, I really enjoyed this. You have a very gentle way of writing-- she is a lucky girl. caterina |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful..soft and serene Bill. Much enjoyed.. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...These are beautiful thoughts, gentle dreams. I'm so glad that an angel touched your heart and soul...appreciating the tender and romantic man that you are. Very beautiful poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so beautiful. I hope your angel keeps helping you. You write such wonderful words, Bill. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart, you don’t know how glad I am to see a poem by you, and this is particularly fine. I would temporise and say this is going to be a short reply, but it probably won’t be, simply because I can’t do them. Well, I can, but I always feel I’m short-changing the writer and I never wish to short-change you. (Besides which darling heart YOU know if I said short it wouldn’t be) This is stunning writing, so incredibly real, so totally in the present. There are those who write in beautiful flowing script describe poetic wonder, and they are good, I don’t deny that they are. But you combine an element of being there, the immediacy of the now, and there are so few writers who can do that with conviction. And you do time after time after time. Truly this is superb and I love it utterly utterly utterly love it. (Oh look it’s an almost brief reply,) well, almost is good. This is fabulous and you know I love it don’t you? Mmmm I do indeed, very much  Love and warm stuff as always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
It is a lucky man who has his own angel...to love into the light...cherish her my friend...beautiful write, Bill. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Bill, your words, pudding smooth, glide across the mind in wonder-tones. splendidly composed, amigo! Your artistic touch is showing.. .again! jeff |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill Very tender is this touch of words. |
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