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VAS
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0 posted 2002-10-20 11:41 AM


Did You?

Did you see that moon last night?
hangin’ there
as if it owned the sky
shining up its intoxication
filling me with sweet elation
inspiring me to exaltation
of the Wondrous Creator...

His moonshine
is the greatest of all,
and no hangover
to throb my head
just add to the numbers
of the beats of my heart.

©October 20, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2002-10-20 11:49 AM


Yes she was near full, no getting away from her. Enjoyed
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2002-10-20 11:52 AM


Yes, and this was inspired by the view of her early in the evening when she was "bigger around than the sun...." surely!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-10-20 09:31 PM


His moonshine
is the greatest of all,
and no hangover
to throb my head
just add to the numbers
of the beats of my heart.

Another gem Vas. Enjoyed

"my reflection becomes me"

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-10-20 10:30 PM


Not only did I enjoy your descriptive writing but I also enjoyed the conversational aspect to it. I felt like you were actually speaking to me and I could feel your excitement in viewing the moon in the night sky.

EA

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-10-20 10:38 PM


Virginia, this picture of the moon that you so elegantly painted is beautiful. Thank you.
Love To All,
Ethel

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-20 11:18 PM




(sigh) Oh Virginia, this is wonderfully spellbinding, sweet friend, I love the bright glow you bring our wonderful Lord here as He shines with Light, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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