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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Hurt I'm so sorry. I let my words cause you pain And now our love is under strain. I'm so sorry. Losing patience I did you chide Instead of letting my hurt subside. I'm so sorry. I should have been in more manly control And let my feelings hide and then go. I'm so sorry. Please find in it your heart to forgive And allow our love to remain and live. I'm so sorry. Accept this heart-express apology And know inside your soul I do love thee. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Scorpio...it's not always good to hide your true feelings, but there are tender ways in which to share them, without causing pain... the man in you will find those ways, so that sorry is removed from your dictionary...for some reason, I feel that you will come across this, very soon... at least, the way your poem reads, it will... thank you... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Karilea...I did hurt my soulmate last night..with words and tone...and in the process I caused her anguish...I forgot the impact that words can have especially when said in anger...I certainly need to find the way back to her heart...I can only hope she's left it open to me... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Scorpio, How sweet and tender. I believe you, and sure she will if she reads this. No matter how we try, when in relationships, I seriously doubt there will ever be a time when things like this don't happen... OK...Ozzie and Harriet, maybe.... gee, that was a long time ago... even I can barely remember that; hope I referenced what I intended  ...the perfect marriage/relationship.. Enjoyed this heartfelt apology, not to mention the fun when making up! Thanks, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-20-2002 11:23 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio, I'm sure in time she will come around..you seem like a gentle and caring person..perhaps if you let that side of your nature show more. Women, and I'm saying this even though I obviously am one..can be skittish creatures at times, I believe, and may feel like a deer caught in the headlights of an oncoming car. Especially if they have been hurt or frightened in the past. I pray all will be well..in time and by the way...excellent write! ~Caring hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
scorpio - this comes from your heart and I do hope you and your loved one can reconcile very soon. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Scorpio../\..very sweet and melodic; enjoyed.. ../\..Spiros ----------------twilight--- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Scorpio, I know this feeling ever so well, sweet friend, and love is not meant to be smooth all the time as indeed there will be turbulence, but if the love is true every situation will be settled and love can only grow stronger with the courage, and if she truly loves you I know she can have the heart to forgive as you are a wonderfully compassionate and sincere person! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, here's wishing you the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
scorpio... i related to this poem more than you know. i guess you could say im in a similar place sort of. your apology sounded sincere to me, and if the love is true...it will all work out! have faith. and take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Regards2you...thank you for your kind words of comfort..no relationship sails calm waters all the time...but I need to rebuild her trust in me...and I shall... Seymour...glad you liked it..it was my heart on my sleeve... Enchantess...I desperately hope she will come around...and I shall be more caring and gentle with her heart...could you maybe put in a good word for me??? *S* Nightshade...that is my fervant wish too... Spiros...thank you for your kind words...I appreciate you taking time to comment... Noah...it would have been smooth if I had listened instead of talked...your words are most comforting.... Amy...my words are most sincere here...and I too hope love will win out...thank you...and may your situation be worked out...faith for us both... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - I pray she does know of forgiveness, for you have said of your feelings well... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I forgive you! I forgive you!---Those would surely be the words that you would hear if she were to read this poem! It has been my experience, that men do not readily ever admit that they may have been wrong, so I find your attitude both amusing and refreshing! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, I believe that you have spoken from your heart here. And now I am hoping that your soulmate will look into her own heart and find the forgiveness for you that you so desperately want. I believe she will, because I KNOW that "true love" always overcomes all obstacles. Best wishes to both of you. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. The poetry and replies that are written from the heart are the best, to me Love To All, Ethel.....garysgirl |
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