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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-10-20 04:11 AM





With sips of champagne
she spoons down the poem
in bits and pieces
leaving something of herself
unfettered between the lines

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-20 07:22 AM


Cher, this is perfect. This IS, passion, imagination, intellect, and 'form'....

I love this poem. You captured how I feel when I write. Yes! Yes! Yes!

You've outdone yourself this time!

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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2 posted 2002-10-20 08:30 AM


Cher, this is beautiful. Sometimes we fail to  read  "between the lines", don't we? thanks for sharing this morning.
Love To All,
Ethel

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3 posted 2002-10-20 02:44 PM




(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, sometimes the best way and most fun way to read a poem is to di-sect it and read it in fragments to unravel the marrow and nectar of ones heart! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-10-20 02:51 PM


CSKpoet
succinct and true a delight to read.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-10-20 06:57 PM


Beautiful Cher!
Just delightful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-21 12:00 PM


Cher, the poem indeed has a piece of the poet's soul between the lines, and this in turn gives life to the words.

You have a beautiful soul as is evidenced in your poetry!

Linda

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-10-21 12:32 PM


Thanks to you all who daily read and post on my behalf
The thing is, this poet writes a lot of different styles and topics...some of which fit me at the time and some that are imagined as thru the eyes of somebody else.
But all is definitely what one feels and emotes to words...Actually I write more up when I am hurting...a little fantasy to combat when reality bytes.
But all of you are my friends and fellow poets whom I treasure very much.
hugs to all of you, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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