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0 posted 2002-10-20 01:08 AM


(This is the sequel to "Doubts and Fears Just Go Away" )

Doubts and fears just go away
Never again come to stay

I'm tired of letting them rule my mind
When true love I know I did find

I let things that happened in my past
control me, but that's over at last

Everything possible to prove your love you've done
And years ago my heart, you already won

When you humbly asked for me to marry you
Without hesitation my heart loudly said, I do

My dear love, you know then, how the doubts and
fears came in
Around and round in my mind they would
wildly spin

No matter how hard I tried to make them go away
They'd leave but still were back another day

A complicated lady, I know I am,
think you
But you know I have determination with what I
decide to do

My dear love, I have decided to listen to the
voice of my heart
Which tells with its loud clear voice, you
and I will never part

For you love me with a love so tender,
gentle and true
In my past I've never been blessed with
a love as I get from you

So those doubts and fears will certainly
have to go away
Never ever again will I allow them
come to stay

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-20 02:01 AM


Ethel,
What else could you do?! Nice write. And lucky gal too.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2002-10-20 02:10 AM


Thanks, Larry, for reading my poem. I appreciate your comments, too.
Love To All,
Ethel

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3 posted 2002-10-20 03:52 AM


Bravo!   well done and good news
hugs to my friend!
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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4 posted 2002-10-20 08:11 AM


Cher, thanks very much for the reply and your sweet comments. I like the smiley clapping his hands. Thank you.

Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-20 09:49 AM


Ethel, I can relate to this alot, as far as fears are concerned.
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6 posted 2002-10-20 10:08 AM


Ethel, I am so glad to read the follow-up. Hon, all life is a gamble and there are NO guarantee's. Sometimes you just have to step out in faith and pray it all works out.

'...My dear love, I have decided to listen to the
voice of my heart
Which tells with its loud clear voice, you
and I will never part...'

This is great advice you have given yourself. We're all rooting for you and sending hugs...Marti

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7 posted 2002-10-20 11:36 AM


garysgirl
Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed.

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8 posted 2002-10-20 12:54 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, I know just how you feel, I too want to get rid of all doubts and fears and love with freedom wholeheartedly, nbut before I can I just want to hear Joanna say how much she loves me in return so I know I'm not sinking too far deep! (sigh) This is wonderfufl, sweet friend, I can't wait till you wedding for I would love to be there and cheer you both on, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-10-20 05:34 PM


Sue, thanks so very much for your sweet reply. I appreciate it.
Love to All,
Ethel

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10 posted 2002-10-20 05:37 PM


Sweet Marti, thanks very much for your heartfelt comments. I appreciate them. I hope all of you will keep praying for me and Gary.

Love To All,
Ethel

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11 posted 2002-10-20 05:39 PM


Thanks so much, Mr. Seymour, for stopping and reading my poem. I appreciate your replies very much.
Love To All,
Ethel

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12 posted 2002-10-20 05:41 PM


Noah, thank you so much for your reply. I wish that all of you could be at our wedding. I hope, too, that all your wishes for you and Joanna come true, sweet friend.
Love To All,
Ethel

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