Secrets Loosed (insp by "Sea Song")

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Open Poetry #23

Secrets Loosed (insp by "Sea Song")

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2002-10-19 10:34 PM

Secrets Loosed

of secrets loosed
in falling rains
some catch passage
down rivers’ lanes

and join with others
from far afield
to be a blend
of flood-like yield

they gather deep
in gulf and bay
then wash the sands
on beach and cay

there heard in rush
to free the soul
but seas can not
give up their role

it is their fate
to hide so much
that men might love
were they to touch

by beach in drift
their cry is long
forever heard
as sea in song

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2002-10-20 09:03 AM

I enjoyed this very much. A talented poet, you are. Inspiration is a wonderful thing and the cause of much more poetry... love that about poetry!

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-10-20 09:06 AM

S Arthur Grey
A delightful read, enjoyed.

Martie

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3 posted 2002-10-20 12:00 PM

S Arthur

This was beautifully done, ...enjoyed the read!

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2002-10-20 12:53 PM

Ah the sea, that briney container of tears. I enjoyed this very much. Well done.

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-10-20 01:30 PM

S Arthur Grey...This was just stunning!!! I felt as if the sea had sung a song written in its salty tears. You interpreted that song for me in a mellow voice, a dancing display of vivid words. ***Ivy Rose

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2002-10-20 10:47 PM

this is beautiful...this is like a salty spray...thank you...helen

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