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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-10-19 07:45 PM



The soft sounds of summer leaves
That dance in the forest cathedral
Songs of birds never heard
Resound in the forest primeval

A place within this world untouched
Never seen by human eyes
A pristine place that hides my soul
Where Angels wings are sighs

Worldly is my everyday name
But my heart holds a passion true
Every day, every moment I live,
I live to love just you.

© Copyright 2002 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-10-19 09:16 PM


Poet deVine - soft write Poet. I thought you were only about 1.5 hours from here, hi neighbor...

BC

Aimster
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2 posted 2002-10-19 09:56 PM


PDV-

beautiful writing from your heart!
this shines across the page...just
lovely *sighs*

take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-10-19 10:31 PM


And lovely imagery.

~Ed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-10-19 10:46 PM


Lovely Sharon...heart sighs.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

regards2you
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5 posted 2002-10-19 11:10 PM


This is beautiful. Enjoyed it tremendously.


Thank you,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-10-19 11:14 PM


PoetDevine, thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.


Love To All,
Ethel......garysgirl

Jamie
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7 posted 2002-10-22 11:43 PM


Beautiful Ms Devine-- very nice.
good to read on a windy fall day

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Robert Adamson
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8 posted 2002-10-23 02:51 AM


I enjoyed this forest cathedral. I used to work in a University Cathedral but, it was never as grand as I remember the forest. I will always remember you gave me a forest cathedral. Thank you.

etoodog

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