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Dreams of wild horses

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Wind
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0 posted 10-19-2002 11:36 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wind


She dreams of wild horses
Running freely in the sky

Troubles left behind them
They keep running till' they die

their manes pick up the wind
And their feet pick up the dust

Their eyes just keep on shineing
And their bones will never rust

And the child, she runs beside them
Her face wide with a smile

Untill she gets her independence
Which won't be for a while

Wind

[This message has been edited by Wind (10-19-2002 11:42 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-19-2002 11:55 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I need to take this poem and memorize it---so that it can replace that nightmare of horses that keep haunting me--
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum46/HTML/002792.html

I thank you so much for this...I was due for a replacement...smile?
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2 posted 10-19-2002 12:01 PM       View Profile for elfin_tigress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elfin_tigress

It's been a while since I've been here, but this was a nice read to get me back into the swing of piptalk.  Welcome to Passions!
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serenity Blaze
I read your poem. I'm sorry that horses scare you like that. I'm not much of a horse person myself, to be honest
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4 posted 10-19-2002 01:26 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Your dream horses are far more appealing than night mares!

I love the lightness and freedom I experienced while reading this poem.

Lovely

EA
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5 posted 10-19-2002 02:09 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I love horses, so this poem title caught my eye. I enjoyed the read.  Welcome to this poetry forum!
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Yay!!! I love horses too, sweet friend,this deeply touched my heart as it flows with such grace! (big hugggssssss) This flows gently with heart, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 10-19-2002 03:07 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

like this, Wind! It has such energy and effervescence!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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8 posted 10-19-2002 03:30 PM       View Profile for Ivy Rose   Email Ivy Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ivy Rose

This is a dream of a poem!!! I love the imagery of the horses...reminds me of the Native American dreamings. ***Ivy Rose
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9 posted 10-19-2002 03:50 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Lovely - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Thank you for the wonderfull messages. I worked really hard o this poem and am really proud of it
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11 posted 11-25-2002 09:13 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Awww, It's amaizing, just a little while ago I was a junior member....

Never be normal!

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12 posted 01-18-2007 03:28 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

I love horses.. This was amazing.. i am so adding this to my library and suggesting my best friend who also posts on pip to read this.
 
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