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ethome
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0 posted 2002-10-19 06:27 AM



(This is a jazz song. Big band sound type of thing.)
She comes quietly from the daylight.
She draws up close with fine perfume.
City sounds fade out of mind
when lady love walks into the room.

She's got a spell to put you under
like a night with a magic moon
You'll hear hearts beat like thunder
when lady love walks into the room.

Dream lover score yourself a sailor
the passion winds are blowing through
There's adventures to discover
when lady love walks into the room.

Bridge:
She wears the latest fashion designs
a look of classic chic refined
She takes dancing steps in new shoes.
face made up tastefully to view
she'll capture eyes and freeze minds
when lady love walks into the room.

Bartender pour the boys a buffer
another swallow for the mood
Cause they can't stay undercover
when lady love walks in the room.

When lady love walks into the room....huumm ummm
Lady love walks into the room.

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

© Copyright 2002 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-10-19 08:30 AM



You made me think of my own Chanel poem...
but I doubt it could ever be a song
like this...

when are you going to pleasure us with another song link, Ethome?  I do so enjoy Isolation Blue...

Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2002-10-19 09:38 AM


Loved this bluesy song. You could almost hear the jazzy beats of the music as Lady Love walked into the room. Amazing song!!!

***Ivy Rose

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3 posted 2002-10-19 10:32 AM


Ethome, I love jazz and I loved this song you have written so well. I, too, could almost hear the music in my ears. Thanks for  sharing this wonderful song.
Love To All,
Ethel

Martie
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4 posted 2002-10-19 11:18 AM


Eric

You got the beat
the slow swing of heat
the sexy shoe of hold me close
in this song

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5 posted 2002-10-19 01:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is sooooooo sensually delightful! (sigh) I know that feeling too when my love walks by in my dreams, where time freezes and I feel hopeles sin her charm! (big hugggsssssss) This is beautiful, yay, I too want to hear your MP3 of it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
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6 posted 2002-10-19 02:04 PM


Excellent! I could almost hear it, and it was easily visualized, as well!

Surely a hit!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-10-19 03:39 PM


Ethome what a wonderful gift you have treated us with!  One can close their eyes, hear it, see it....so very well done Ethome, much enjoyed!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-10-19 06:52 PM


ethome - I like it. I'm going be taping a few songs I've written at the studio next Saturday...

BC

ethome
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9 posted 2002-10-20 02:43 PM


Thanks to all who commented on this piece. I surely appreciate the input so very much!
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