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Open Poetry #23

Let me be the one

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-10-19 06:18 AM

Perfect is the only way
To describe the way we are
Just open up a little bit
Babe we’ve come so far

Let me be the one
To undo the chains
Show you how it should be
I know you feel the same.

Open up and tell me
What’s going on inside
No more holding on
To emotions locked up tight.

Let me hear the thoughts
Deep from within
Its time to let them out
And let your life begin

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2002-10-19 08:55 AM

This is sweet...loving and caring and sharing....

Thank you,

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-19 11:18 AM

Fee, I like your poem. If it's not fiction and intended for your loved one, I do hop the person appreciates it as much as I did. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-11-20 02:42 PM

Fee, this sounds like
the beginning of a song...

more, please!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-11-20 04:24 PM

Hello Fee

This was so heartfelt and full of love. It's nice to see you here again and I hope all is well with you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-11-20 10:38 PM

oh yes, to have one truly open up and trust in loves embrace, rare when it happens, isnt it? nice sentiments

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