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dreams of bones (for mikey)
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dreams of bones (for mikey) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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"pick another bone" she said take a path of scream on knees-- "take another piece of me" dreams of bones are dirges... bled. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-19-2002 05:42 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You write him as he would himself... and thats a very very cool thing.   Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Great work.... H. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
He's a sweetie! It pleases me to read this tribute to him.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Wow!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful dedication for our dearest friend Michael, sweet friend, I just love your unique and novel style, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, witch Mikey's gonna love this. I did. Ed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh yesss.... This sounds like Mikey! He will enjoy this as much as I did. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Sorry, I have no idea who Mikey is, but I liked the poem! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I think Mikeys going to love this! I did! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It is just dawning on this dense poet that it might help if I included the source of inspiration here---geeeeeez, I get so mad at me sometimes. Here ya go, a clarification for the readers and a plug for Mikey: /pip/Forum55/HTML/000287.html quite often I am inspired by the words of other poets. Nothing wrong with that--some of the most fascinating reading in history is the "poet jousting" and "call and answer" works inspired among artists. But DO give credit, not only is that polite, but it's the law.  I'm sure there are better examples of this type of thing than the one that comes to mind for me---which was Joni Mitchell's "The Circle Game" in reply to Neil Young's "Sugar Mountain". But thanks for reading, and thank YOU, Mikey--um...where ever you are???? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I first I thought, could that be Mickey Fin. LOL but then I read your explanation. Enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mikey all the way.... seems I am forgetting the way to short verse.. noce to see you and Mikey perfecting it.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly have a way with words! I enjoy the fruits of your craft! ---and Mikey will too! EA |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Quite excellent, really. Thanks, Sen. I'm down in the dumps this fine morning, and this helped to lift the pall a bit. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey MIKEY... sigh... smilies will have to do...but I'm here if ya need an ear... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this combo...... is perfect |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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